While The Pressure Slowly Builds ~*~ Awarded ~*~
Sing me the song of inadequacyand I'll sing you the songof contempo:Stationary bleeding with the encumbranceof sufficient evaluation:On and off in lightning bolt fuse.Aspiring for...
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((((~Cho~)))))The hustle and bustle of life, and all of the pressure and expectations that seem to pile upon us in everyday life can absolutely be consuming at times, and leave us feeling as if we are...
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I love your use of imagery. Excellent piece of writing - I liked the last paragraph most. Thanks for sharing your heartfelt!
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. Brilliant Cho, it seems to be a continual race to keep up only to feel we are slipping back. I just sit and breethe and say....I loved the read.Love Maggie
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~Cho~ What a great message you have weaved with this one! Love it from start to finish...Congrats on your award sweet friend :)
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ChoYou did an excellent job on the imagery in this poem. The building anxiety and pressure is well captured, and I like the format. Congratulations on receiving Stephanie's award. FairEllen
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**Sky**Quote:Dear Poetess, I have a feeling you'll haveno trouble "Aspiring for excellence",well done Cho..keep writing. *smile*Thank you for your kind hearted words that soothe my spirit throughout...
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**Steph**Quote:Cho ~ This is WONDERFUL!!!!! Very, very much enjoyed. I'll be back. *wink*I am so glad you enjoyed it!Thank you sooo much for this award too!! ^-^ ~Cho <><xoxo"...the beauty of...
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**Mir**Quote:And too much pressure makes the building stumbling down.Amazing, Cho.. you said very well some true statements.Sometimes "pressure nerves" work for us or against us: we either freak out...
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**Tara**Quote:Elegant and expressive depiction Cho, congrats on the well deserved awardThank you very much!I'm so glad you liked it! ~Cho <><xoxo"...the beauty of the...
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**Cheryl**Quote:~Cho~ Your words ring with such truth...Perfectly penned Sweet Friend..Much enjoyed!..Congrats on the Award!..*BIG HUGS* Much Love ~CherylThank you dear friend.I'm glad you stopped in!...
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**Bri**Quote:Wowsa!!! Spiraling into Faith... What a ride and what an ending... **Clapping** Terrific writing Cho and many congrats on your awarding... Bri~Thank you so much!! ~Cho...
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**Mikey**Quote:You're strong and admirable. :)You're kind, and I thank you. ~Cho <><xoxo"...the beauty of the waves..."www.myspace.com/nodaybut2_day(Send me a message before adding me as a...
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**Dawnie**Quote:Such a deeply moving and powerful message, awesomely written....congratulations on your much deserved award, lovely lady...and I hope those finals wrap up soon, and life simmers down...
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**Febi**Quote:I love your use of imagery. Excellent piece of writing - I liked the last paragraph most. Thanks for sharing your heartfelt!The pleasure was mine. Thank you for stopping in and I'm so...
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**Maggie**Quote:. Brilliant Cho, it seems to be a continual race to keep up only to feel we are slipping back. I just sit and breethe and say....I loved the read.Life is a race that sometimes just...
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**Alana**Quote:~Cho~ What a great message you have weaved with this one! Love it from start to finish...Congrats on your award sweet friend :)I'm so glad you liked it!Thanks for stopping in! ~Cho...
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**Ellen**Quote:You did an excellent job on the imagery in this poem. The building anxiety and pressure is well captured, and I like the format. Congratulations on receiving Stephanie's award.I'm so...
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Quote:Aspiring for excellence,Perspiring for time elapsedin configured contoursand expressive oratories.Hey Cho, I quoted this exceptionalstanza though it's your final linesthat totally blew me away....
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